Maudlin

She sat there, every eventide when the empyrean was saffron, an amber tint; the xanthous color ebbing to the horizon as the night begged to resurrect. It wasn’t kalopsia, it was a cinematic array of events I dreamt for. Elysian Dreams. Ginger hair, bold and beautiful, she was the sandpaper to my tender soul, the antidote to my poisoned heart, poisoned with the daydreams decorated with her images. I was a thalassophile , she was the ocean I wanted to drown in. 

Saudade, its been years, I still glance from the lunette to stare at an empty seat. 

 

*written in response to Twittering Tale #33 Picture prompt.

Picture courtesy :-“Architecture” from Pixabay.com*

Advertisements

27 Comments Add yours

  1. Kat Myrman says:

    Hi! Your tale is beautiful, but there is one tiny detail for this challenge. Twittering Tales are 140 Characters or less, so as to fit the parameters of a tweet. I do like your Tale though. Very poetically written. 😊

    Liked by 2 people

    1. 140 characters. Right! I misinterpreted it as 140 words. I feel so stupid right now. Right okay, I’ll come up with another one and send it to you tomorrow. Sorry for the inconvenience again . And thanks for the appreciation 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Kat Myrman says:

        Please don’t feel stupid. You are not the first newcomer to make this assumption. It is no inconvenience, really. 😊

        Liked by 2 people

      2. Do you want me to remove the picture and the pingback from this post and write a new one where I shall add the both?

        Liked by 1 person

      3. Kat Myrman says:

        No. Please don’t. I hope others will see it. As I said it’s a very beautiful story. 😊

        Liked by 1 person

      4. Thank you so much again, I’ll post an apt entry within 140 characters tomorrow.

        Liked by 1 person

      5. Kat Myrman says:

        I look forward to your tale! 😊

        Like

  2. Aayushi says:

    This is beautiful. Also, I love your About Me page. And you’re all the more cooler now, fellow Rma fan! 😸

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Thank you again (I’m horrible at formalities and I need to come up with alternatives for the expressing of gratitude statement) . “The more cooler” – I doubt that. Real Madrid, you too? It’s been a historic year *proud, teary whale eyes* (Okay, I’m gonna stop here or else I’ll go on a crazy football convo here)

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Aayushi says:

        Haha. It was pleasure reading your work. Which makes you cool, yes. YES SIMILAR FEELINGS. It has been one hell of a year with zizou and its always nice to find rma fans when you’re surrounded by cules 😛

        Liked by 1 person

      2. I hope there are no Barca Fanboi reading these comments here . Haha.

        Liked by 1 person

  3. You never cease to amaze, do yo?!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Haha, thanks . I should try the next time, shouldn’t I ?

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Yes, of course, haha! Hey, can you check my contact page and see if everything is fine? A person said that it wasn’t worth

        Liked by 1 person

      2. I did. Everything’s in order. just you need to work on your images. You need to use better resolution images.

        Liked by 1 person

      3. Did you get any mail from me? I think I sent a mail to everyone by mistake. Stupid of me

        Liked by 1 person

      4. I need to check. I have like more than 2k mails pending. So I will see and let you know

        Liked by 1 person

      5. OK. Dude, 2K is a lot

        Liked by 1 person

      6. Yeah, and I’m so lazy to actually go through all of em

        Liked by 1 person

      1. Thank you so much!

        Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank You so much! 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  4. Veronica M. says:

    “She was the sandpaper to my tender soul”…wow. You’re quite a writer, and I’m officially jelly rn xD Seriously amazing job though 🙂
    And thanks so much for the follow!!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you so much . Haha. Thanks again . And you’re welcome

      Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s