Aegis

via Daily Prompt: Uniform

 

Left in the uniform

I waited for your return

It can’t be“, I screamed

 

Returned in a pall

Tears, you are draped with the flag

Brother, I waited.”

 

 

*Syllable Structure= 5-7-5*

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20 Comments Add yours

  1. Veena says:

    Well expressed.

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    1. Thank you so much! ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thank you so much! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Riya says:

    *envy* for how your slaying the 5-7-5 pattern. Awesome tho

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    1. You do it much better tho. Thanks

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      1. Riya says:

        Nahh you do it better!

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      2. You are underestimating the vast expanse of knowledge and exquisite raw talent you possess. You are harnessing it in the most flawless way, like a flower nurtured to bloom, bright with colors.

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      3. Riya says:

        Okay firstly wow. Secondly that was so sweet Thank youโค and thirdly I’m gonna go cry for how nice that was๐Ÿ˜‚.
        Seriously, you have no idea how much this means to me. All of this keeps me going and continue to blog ๐Ÿ™‚

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      4. Savor the moment. You’ll have more come by. And by more i mean MORE. You need to keep blogging as you don’t know many people (Including me) look up to for self motivation. So dont give up on it

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      5. Riya says:

        Thank you so much!

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      6. Anytime! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. agnuswalters says:

    I’m blown away, astounded, speechless, whatever you want to call it. I tried coming up with one haiku and that made no sense and even that took me a whole night to come up with. HERE YOU ARE WRITING TWO OF THEM…AND THEY ARE CONNECTED… AND THEY FOLLOW THE 5-7-5 SCHEME TOO!!! Your name should be in the haiku wall of fame…I bet there’s such a thing.

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    1. Riya says:

      I agree๐Ÿ˜‚

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      1. agnuswalters says:

        Lol I know right!

        Like

    2. *heavy breathing* whoa. Okay. I am still a prodigy. Thank you so much! And here I thought my first attempt at a traditional haiku will go down in its maiden voyage but your support has been the catalyst of driving me forward to write more. Thanks again ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. agnuswalters says:

        Will go down? Boy haven’t you been paying attention to the comments section? Where I have, in very colourful language, explained your prodigal abilities?

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      2. No No, I meant when I wrote it I thought it will be all be embers instead of flames and fire.

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      3. agnuswalters says:

        Yeah well, you thought terribly wrong.

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      4. I guess now I did

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